there are a few things here and there that i think look better on the older version, but IDC xDDD especially some of the shading lol i still think this looks really awesome >u<
the old version of this i am still very proud off, this is just my trying too see how much i've improved c:
tell me what you all think! :'D
old -> not going to bother filling out that draw this again meme thing xDD
now let me critique you now, the vision is actually great but you made everything look a little gloomy (well, if that's the point), but I like how you made the heart semi-glowing.
The last time I saw this, it looks like Phineas has no bones o-o'' but after your performance, you really made him have a 'body' in the picture. It looks really solid and has complete impact with the viewer's eyes.Speaking of eyes, I love how the tears! ^^
so I say that you did a wonderful job in re-doing this!
Beautifal as always again. This version looks even more awesome than the old one. If I see Phinny like this I want to cry, but at the same time i'm saying "Awww". I just can't explain why. I love the shading and light, and the heart that's "floating" out of Phineas looks just wonderful. Amazing. Beautiful. I've got no words for it, actually Kiki-Kit, you're a amazing artist. And you did a amazing work on this. You've improved a LOT, and I wish that I was so good as you. But I think that I'll need a couple of years before I reach this :3
With you permission... May i do like a picture to continue this one plzz i have the perfect idea nd I WILL GIVE YOU CREDIT (i was planning to draw phineas now in isabella's arms(izzy crying of course, phinny uncontious <-- Spell fail) nd the heart is just floating... so may i?
BUT OVERALL This Drawing is just FERBING AMAZING!!!!!!! <3
TT-TT R.I.P. Phineas Flynn We are gathered here today. To honor one of the most brilliant people of our time. Phineas, there was a life time ahead of you. A brilliant future. You were well loved. A great family. A secret agent pet platypus. *Man runs up and wipes people's memories* Many great inventions made, and many more in the making. And even a girl that was completely infatuated in you. Goodbye Phineas. May you find happiness on the other side.
and I mean A LOTTTT
now let me critique you now,
the vision is actually great but you made everything look a little gloomy (well, if that's the point), but I like how you made the heart semi-glowing.
The last time I saw this, it looks like Phineas has no bones o-o''
but after your performance, you really made him have a 'body' in the picture. It looks really solid and has complete impact with the viewer's eyes.Speaking of eyes, I love how the tears! ^^
so I say that you did a wonderful job in re-doing this!
This version looks even more awesome than the old one. If I see Phinny like this I want to cry, but at the same time i'm saying "Awww". I just can't explain why. I love the shading and light, and the heart that's "floating" out of Phineas looks just wonderful. Amazing. Beautiful. I've got no words for it, actually
Kiki-Kit, you're a amazing artist. And you did a amazing work on this. You've improved a LOT, and I wish that I was so good as you. But I think that I'll need a couple of years before I reach this :3
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