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Submitted: September 8, 2012
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~.Lullaby for a stormy night.~by ~kiki-kit

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Cartoons / Drawings

~~~Lullaby for a Story Night by Vienna Teng~~~
Little child, be not afraid
The rain pounds harsh against the glass
Like an unwanted stranger
There is no danger
I am here tonight

Little child
Be not afraid
Though thunder explodes
And lightning flash
Illuminates your tearstained face
I am here tonight

And someday you'll know
That nature is so
This same rain that draws you near me
Falls on rivers and land
And forests and sand
Makes the beautiful world that you see
In the morning

Little child
Be not afraid
The storm clouds mask your beloved moon
And its candlelight beams
Still keep pleasant dreams
I am here tonight

Little child
Be not afraid
The wind makes creatures of our trees
And the branches to hands
They're not real, understand
And I am here tonight

And someday you'll know
That nature is so
This same rain that draws you near me
Falls on rivers and land
And forest and sand
Makes the beautiful world that you see
In the morning

For you know, once even I
Was a little child
And I was afraid
But a gentle someone always came
To dry all my tears
Trade sweet sleep the fears
And to give a kiss goodnight

Well, now I am grown
And these years have shown
Rain's a part of how life goes
But it's dark and it's late
So I'll hold you and wait
'til your frightened eyes do close

And I hope that you'll know
That nature is so
This same rain that draws you near me
Falls on rivers and land
And forests and sand
Makes the beautiful world that you see
In the morning

Everything's fine in the morning
The rain will be gone in the morning
But I'll still be here in the morning
~~~ [link] ~~~

;u;
finally
a mother daughter picture~~

drawn during my join.me~ :D ~~which is still going btw~~

and its lineless
omfg i missed doing that so much xDDD

...
so..
yeah
;u;

critique plz ;o;

Claudia and Lizzie [c] me
~.kiki.~

Critique by ~RobbieMelrose Sep 14, 2012, 8:07:16 AM

My word on this artwork is that it tells about a mother's love towards her daughter. I know it's a bit emotional, and I'm very heartfelt when I saw this. About these expressions, I've seen those teary eyes are much more in contrast with the stormy weather that was on a window. Yep, and all that impression, all good. Very soft tones are much favorable as your style is strikingly in contrast. Although it's based on a song, I think the theme is perfect, I could agree. Both the originality and technique in this artwork are very okay, so for that, four and a half for the originality and five for the technique. The rest, five stars.

Good luck, Serina, and keep up the good work.

-Rick Robin

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Critique by *Agetian Sep 8, 2012, 9:45:10 PM

This picture is amazingly emotional, moving, and heart-warming. I love the techniques you've chosen here, Kiki, the bright eyes and tears in the darkness of a stormy night bring out the emotion and the warmth of the moment perfectly. In addition to that, the overall impression the picture makes and the lasting impact is strengthened by the softness of the tones and the overall beauty of the style which is very consistent in your pictures and which makes me watch every picture you publish with great interest and appreciation. Even if the picture theme is not super original, its execution is original indeed, original to your style and interpretation - so, originality of the theme is 4/5 and originality of your interpretation of the theme is 5/5 because you masterfully used your style to portray the chosen scene. Everything else is a straight 5/5 in my opinion due to the fact that you've portrayed the moment perfectly, using awesome digital drawing techniques that make a strong impact on the watchers such as yours truly. Thank you for your talent, Kiki, keep up the great job!

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~DreamTheBunny Mar 12, 2013 Student General Artist

ASDFGHJKJHGFD WHY HAVEN''T I SEEN THIS BEFORE?!!??!!?!? QAQ

~Alygal281 Sep 24, 2012 Student Artist

awww. so heartfelt! I love it!
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